Well...
The drawings, in and of themselves, were good (even though I'm not sure what the hell either one of them were), but the actual animation of each was rather poor... Also, if you are going to use text and not voices, try to give it a second or so longer so that people will be able to read everything.... If you test it, you read it faster than everone else because you already know what it says.... Other than that, keep it up.... 3/5 Review 7/10 Stars